Wednesday 25 March 2015

The Carnival

At the top of the giant, luminous, spinning ferris wheel I can see the radiant lights of the theme park glowing brightly. I can taste the sweet sugar cotton candy as it dissolves into my taste buds. I can see the destructive bumper cars smashing each other like stags ramming each other and locking horns. I can hear the roaring log flume splashing through the water. Everywhere I look there is something exciting happening.
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2 comments:

  1. Anonymous30 March 2015 at 13:53

    Star 1:I Like this word luminous
    Star 2:I Like this word radiant
    Rocket: try not to put more than two adjectives in a row

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  2. Anonymous30 March 2015 at 20:40

    star 1:I like your ending
    star 2:I like how you said giant luminous spinning ferris wheel
    rocket:more describing sentences

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